WK1: Lady Poet vs Blas

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WK1

Punches due: Tuesday 19th August

Voting ends: Friday 22nd August

You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.


@Lady Poet
@Blas

fuckin w/ u? i'd need an aids test, it is true women get paid less..
but after reading the QUALITY of your WORK i'd say it MAKES SENSE

You might wanna step off, know your place in this game,
I'm igniting this fire, you just fanin' the flame!

Ouuuu blas!! I like ittttt fire..

Paid less quality of ya work makes sense/cents overall fire flames.. vote blas

Sorry lady my breakdown for you didnt write but I mean to say you got better. Nice double on the end punch

Structurally Blas wins, lady poet had a decent concept with " a fan in the flame. "
But it felt unfinished and lacks interlocking pieces.
I don't think Blas really gave it much thought but his set- up, connectors yet safe punchline gives him the win for me.
Good round @Lady Poet you almost had him In my opinion.
Try connecting your first line and second line better while simultaneously using niche multiple syllable rhymes.

Thanks gentlemen

V/ Blas, not a good battle tbh.