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    I Rose from Concrete 🖤🥀 NoNun2's Avatar
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    Love and War

    Love and War

    I only been so sick once before
    Seems my boyfriend found a whore
    I never been good at heart break
    Only war
    I guess I don’t have what take
    To say no more

    Pathetic? nah I just get it
    26 years and they threw away the key
    Then all his secrets was reveled to me
    Do I let it?
    Or forget it?
    Cause nobody was here for me
    Nobody stopped the pain of misery
    Nobody cares I’m still trying to get free
    Nobody knows cause they don’t see how I see
    It’s hard to take the higher road
    All I keep seeing is another one sould
    And god I was never good at growing old
    Just these stories left to be told

    It seems she is 23
    And prettier than me
    Same story different bitch
    But who respect a crime of passion
    Not a valid reason to be left in a ditch
    So i guess im gonna cash in
    I fold
    I never imagined a world so cold
    Do I become a hitter cause I let her
    Or do I just ask him if that pussy get wetter
    Nah I know better
    So I keep reading my grandmas letter
    I ain’t gonna sweat her

    My heart is broken even though I always knew that he lied
    Thank god I’m a far cry away from suicide
    I was in shock for hours before I finally cried
    Wave and smile another part of me just died
    But still i ride
    I guess it’s all personal set to the side

    I just wanna know why
    Why pretend and tell a lie
    Why a friend and say goodbye
    Why do you love if it can bring pain
    Why look above when the sky can bring rain
    Why no respect once you go insane
    Why I keep asking
    Cause you will never know my name

    Love and war
    What’s left of good for
    I was too scared to walk out the door
    Now I’m just begging to hurt me no more
    +~+~+~+~+~+~+~+~+
    As much as I hallucinate and see him…
    I’m willing to take that chance

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    Re: Love and War

    This was cool.. Nice ryhmes and testimony to heartbreak after cheaters betray.. I be Knowing the Feels.. Keep your Head up love some people are immoral & thats up to us to decipher day to day as we meet people & reading people is literally one of the hardest things to do without the experience. This has a Nice staggered ryhme scheme but it flows nicely... I really liked this line:

    Quote Originally Posted by NoNun2
    Same story different bitch
    But who respect a crime of passion
    Not a valid reason to be left in a ditch
    So i guess im gonna cash in
    I fold
    I never imagined a world so cold
    ...M³...
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