WK1: Lady Poet vs Blas

[Bag Mandela]

WK1

Punches due: Tuesday 19th August

Voting ends: Friday 22nd August

You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.


@Lady Poet
@Blas

[Blas]

fuckin w/ u? i'd need an aids test, it is true women get paid less..
but after reading the QUALITY of your WORK i'd say it MAKES SENSE

[Lady Poet]

You might wanna step off, know your place in this game,
I'm igniting this fire, you just fanin' the flame!

[FaQEyeReddit]

Ouuuu blas!! I like ittttt fire..

Paid less quality of ya work makes sense/cents overall fire flames.. vote blas

Sorry lady my breakdown for you didnt write but I mean to say you got better. Nice double on the end punch

[Aminal]

Structurally Blas wins, lady poet had a decent concept with " a fan in the flame. "
But it felt unfinished and lacks interlocking pieces.
I don't think Blas really gave it much thought but his set- up, connectors yet safe punchline gives him the win for me.
Good round @Lady Poet you almost had him In my opinion.
Try connecting your first line and second line better while simultaneously using niche multiple syllable rhymes.

[Lady Poet]

Thanks gentlemen

[Allen Knight]

V/ Blas, not a good battle tbh.